The copy audit: the climb card stops calling itself a death match, the machine gets named, the drill decrypts, the duel names both stakes

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>

src/zombies.js

@@ -121,7 +121,10 @@ export function spawnMachine() {
   aside('ump_machine', 0.4); // benched with the rest of Daniel's personality — see aside()
   if (!G.seen.mach) {
     G.seen.mach = true;
-    G.card = { title: 'SWING TO RETURN — OR SWISH IT AWAY', color: UI.warm, t: 2.6 };
+    // the card NAMES the thing it explains — an instruction without a subject read as noise
+    // (2026-08-29 copy audit)
+    G.card = { title: 'A BALL MACHINE', sub1: 'SWING ITS SHOTS BACK — OR SWISH THEM AWAY',
+               color: UI.warm, t: 2.8 };
   }
 }